Review Detail of Exyz030 in Fallen for the Villain BL (18+)

The plot is AMAZING. It's a very creative scenario BUT... the grammar is TERRIBLE! The story development has some serious plot holes too... It would be great if it was rewritten, because it's so difficult to understand what's happening! To The author, apparently english isn't your first language (neither is mine) so I recommend reading more books in english to be able to write better! My best wishes~♡