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2023-09-24 03:22

Great plot, interesting characters, and dark but intriguing twists. It needs editing or beta reader to fix the real world chaotic writing in the beginning and wrong word usage: mourn/ moan, sign/ sigh, grin/grind, warp/ wrap, angle/ angel. The last 4 paragraphs of the previous chapter are inserted in the beginning of the next chapter; I find it annoying.Overall: I recommend this book, but user be aware of the slight issues that can be a mental stumbling block

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