Item: The Mysterious Evolution
Rating: 5
Author: bunnyrabbit

bunnyrabbitLv22yr

2022-06-12 09:43

Writing Quality: At first, it was written in a third-person perspective and shifted to first-person in the second chap. This technique is very easy to mess up but the author pulled it off. The narration paints images in our minds. Not overly descriptive nor too less. Just enough. Story Development: It started with a woman being injured. And if I'm understanding it right, she has a regeneration skill. Since I haven't read that far ahead yet, I wonder if magic was normal in this world. Or were the monks she's living with know about it, at least? Stability of Updates: So far so good. Character Design: I couldn't say much at this point because as I said, I haven't read that far ahead yet. But looking at the first three chaps, I have the impression of her as an aloof type of person. She doesn't like to interact with people very much which made me wonder if she had any traumatic experience with dealing with people considering she was injured so badly in the opening scene. Or was that just her personality? World-Building: What I LOVE about this was the world-building wasn't thrown as an exposition but instead, given to us bits by bits. I love it that way as it gives me a sense that the author trusts its readers. [Keep it up, Author.]

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