Yes I am very hypocritical, thank you very much! In case you had read with your butt, I said I would post faster if the chapter came out right.

Until now I have been changing the point of view and warning when it has changed. . If you want to complain about 'Him' and 'Her' change all the Brazilian Portuguese to not give any Gender. it is annoying to have to at least rewrite several words because I have to change .. 'dela' that is at the end of the sentence that would have almost no importance in the context of the sentence if it were in the case of Brazilian Portuguese. . If you don't like the fic being rushed, complain to the people who complained about it being too slow. I'm not paid to write, I write just for fun, I never asked for money or anything for people to read this. it's a fic, asking for money for writing it is something ridiculous.

I mean, what did you expect from a harem fic? most of them are like this

wow so much ignorance... friend the MC is considered by himself a playboy and also those 2 relationships are strange by themselves. first of all shizuka is a woman desperate to get married, who casually met the MC in a bar and with whom she flirted, slept with him and created a relationship. You have to keep in mind that this relationship was formed before the story began. second is a Goddess who could destroy the MC at any time but due to a contract which must give a wish to someone which our MC who was currently in shock and frozen by the instinctive fear of being before the first thing that came to her head that is to love her and well she accepted, besides she in her manga was always somewhat awkward with human culture and its things, which often flirted with the MC (Google traslater)

I doubt that I will participate in discussion that sure you will try to strike in comments (I've already seen pretty offensive responses, like someone talked bad about your family instead of pointing what they don't like and already see where this all is going to end, and I am no fan of iternet's war). Ok, let's set aside "her" and "he", but I think some correctors can solve the problem. When I was talking about messy points of view I was talking how you mix third person view description with "I" or other first person ones. The same with opposite descriptions. I get that you write for fan, but sometimes you almost devolve in "chatting" and not story telling. I think that to have real fun you should do writing properly insted of making it look like (and treat as) Redit post. I don't ask you to get all serious and descreptive like some Royal Roads writers, for examples, I just ask you to do it properely, it would serve better for both you and readers.

What manga is the girl from cover picture from she looks familiar but cant remember?

The Elder Sister-like One