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Yorgan
YorganLv122yr
2022-09-07 00:12

For me this is author best work, good mc with nice side characters. Character grow here was pretty smooth and not like other dumb author who use the "character grow card" to make mc full retard/naive. World building is good with no large amount of info being thrown at you making the read boring, can't wait for mc to go to another islands and see how other races will react with him being a man. Romance is a little bit forced but still pretty good and i like how we get surprised at how some characters act in some manners showing they are not shallow or bland. Writing quality is good and with a good flow, even the first POV (MC SIDE) is good and don't fell forced or cringe like some authors.

500th Time Reborn, A World Only Known By Women: The Karma System

Magic_
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691 Chs

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Thanks man, I really appreciate your feedback. Very well put.

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Magic_
Magic_Author

Author here! Oh boy, I can't explain to you how much fun I am having writing this book! A world without men! Cool enough concept, but lets add 11 other races and give then some funny attributes, and throw out most preconcieved notions about them! What will you find in this book? 1. OP MC 2. MC that takes no sh*t(Can be a bit of a loose cannon) 3. Laughs 4. Women of every flavor(I'm open to idea's!) 5. S*x(Or what are you guys doing here?) 6. Battle thirsty MC 7. Weapon Crafting (Gun's and much more!) 8. Cooking(Because people get hungry) Things you won't find 1. NTR 2.R*pe 3.Abused or Meanly tricked MC 4.Self righteous MC If you read this far, Drop you golden tickets! Gifts of 500 or more and I will drop an extra chapter!

2yr

Sir_Oink
Sir_OinkLv2

Reveal spoiler

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SiggFord98
SiggFord98Lv14

Imagine with me a world of only women, devoid of all men. To some this world would seem ideal, and to others a complete nightmare! I believe our main character Galio finds it to be the former! The female characters reactions to the first ever man in their world and the concepts foreign to them are beyond hilarious, and there is much “exploring” to be done! The characters and dialogue are funny and thought pretty well. I look forward to reading future chapters as Galio continues to explore a literal No man’s land! 👍

2yr
Vereth612
Vereth612Lv13

The dialogue between characters is so bad. Everyone seems to talk like a robot. Every sentence is dragged out and over explained. It feels like the author is trying to write as many words as possible and just drags out everything they say.

2yr
Vladislav_Romanov
Vladislav_RomanovLv14

MC has a weak mindset. He lived 499 lives?? He looks more like a schoolboy facing the first love. Look for Alexander the Great. In 32 years of his life he built one of the biggest Empires on the Earth. And compare him to the MC. Do you understand the difference now?? Difference in the mindset, will and decision making. "I go where i think is good, i take whatever i want to for i am the God and my word is the Law."

1yr
DrGrace
DrGraceLv14

At what chapter does the exploring starts in detail? um...Ah...asking for a friend

2yr
Cristofer157
Cristofer157Lv1

I'm on chapter 18 currently, so when is the MC going to meet that Goddess from the early chapters? it will take a long time?.....................,.

2yr
EmpathicWan
EmpathicWanLv11

Stop tagging male centered harems as "yuri". It's not Yuri if it's a male centered harem, no matter what the women "do". Not sure why authors keep doing this unless they just want to spread their net as far as possible to find more readers.

1yr
cheelzy
cheelzyLv13

BEWARE FOR WEBNOVELS STEALING OUR HARD EARNED POINTS!! POINTS NOW HAVE A EXPIRATION!!

2yr
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