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2024-07-14 04:05

I read it for a bit and along with other reviews and comments I can tell that the initial problems are going to be consistent throughout at least for a couple hundred chapter or more… There is a lack of interaction between the MC and the world(0 description) The plot seems rushed for no reason, I can count with my fingers the amount of times the MC had a proper conversation with the supposed female lead and she is already “in love”, everything is skipped pver and off screened. The concept is pretty unique I’ll give the novel that and I was a bit excited at first… However the blatant plot armor and the lack of reasoning and interaction from the MC just butchers it, for example he “tames” beasts but then forget about them… there is no real connection and it feels plain soulless Anyways, the novel is good for a very casual read if you are bored… it might get better or not after hundreds of chapters but is it worth the time? Not for me at least, I don’t mind if the MC is naive at the beginning but when there is no basic world building or dialogue I can’t tolerate 3 stars 🙇‍♂️

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