the integrated story line and plot is amazing. unclear links are present but that may be due to the novel being at the beginning stages and the story just unwrapping. main character profile is good but too much focus on multiple powers in my opinion rather than an overall powerful power however that is just the writers perspective and i respect that since he is the one developing the story. a further stable show of power between the system and mageroth will be much more pleasurable for the readers to have a good buildup
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