Review Detail of TheDeadslayer in A Hentai System in the World of Dungeon Ni Deai
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Honestly, this doesn't serve me as a fanfiction r18, nor as a serious story, it's too little descriptive in the parts r18, and they usually go by very quickly, it gives you the feeling of more than having read an r18 chapter, you read a synopsis, and as a serious story there are some inconsistencies, like the fact that you can't lie to a god, or the fact that you can control at level 4 being a measly level 1, or the fact that it took you longer to beat a minotaur that to the infantile dragon, etc. Well, good luck with your writing, I guess.
A Hentai System in the World of Dungeon Ni Deai
ParodyGirl
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Well, the protagonist is the only one who can lie to the Gods, and I warned this a few times ( but I should have made it clearer ). This is the first time I'm writing +18 content, so I'm really bad at it. The skill is not inconsistency, it was my choice lol Well, it wasn't that it was faster to kill the Minotaur, both were easy xD Thanks for the review!