Review Detail of Shalott in Owned By The Omega Emperor [BL]

The book is okay. It didn't grab me, but I guess it's a matter of sentence construction. Many sentences are just too long, tedious and confusing. This makes it difficult to read and slows the reader down. Instead of focusing on the fate of the characters, I find myself trying to unravel overly complex sentences. If the author corrects this, the book will be better