Definitely needs an editor. But it is good novel. There are knights so I like it hehehe If you correct your grammar this novel will have potential.

This book has some serious potential, I couldn't put it down once I started reading it. The only problem is the writing quality. This book is awesome, and once it's fixed it'll be a gem.

The Novel is very interesting, waiting for next chapters. I like that there is included the village building, and hope for more of that content.

My brother asked me, so here I am. :DDDDDD So far, not many chapters to say anything. Editor definitely could be helpful here. Story is rather slow yet interesting.

The novel is good and has potential. Worldbuilding is good and the development of the story is interesting. The writing quality is good and the author, you can do it. Fighting!!

The premise is great,the plot has great potential,do work on the world building and quality of writing,as this is a common problem we,novice authors face,once you sharpen your writing skills ,none can stop your novel from shining

The writing needs some work but the story has potential, and I would love to read more.