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Review Detail of anto1 in Blacksmith: You Are Making Mjolnir For The Forging Exam?

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anto1
anto1Lv49mthanto1

The story is fine as long as you don't think too much. If you do start thinking though, there are so many dumb stuff over the first 430 chapters and after the 430 chapters. Just to note, the whole story completely changes after the first 430 chapters.A notable mention pre-430 chapters:- Mentions having 2 8 star blacksmiths and then mentions 7 stars being the limit in the span of like 10 chapters (7 star being the limit was after)- A random cultivator ascending to an higher world doesn't make any sense in the context since we never really see anyone above 7 stars even though 8 and 9 stars seems to be mentionned and the highest ranked people are only at 7 stars.About the post 430 chapter mark. Everything about the story just changes. The translation quality drastically drops, "china #1" kind of behavior appears (MC literally makes a drug which extends lifespan only for Chinese people because it "costs less points", which doesn't even make sense since that's more of an extra feature than a removal of a feature for it to cost more). The whole forging system doesn't exist anymore, I'm not even sure magic still exists anymore since it's never mentioned ever after. The whole star ranking system completely disappears, there are no more ranks, there are no more cultivators. The whole research and development system literally takes the MC days to develop a world changing thing. Oh, also, the MC got a girlfriend sometimes during the story apparently although it was never mentionned. The MC also apparently went from being a 20-21 year old to something like a 36-37 year old man according to his own lifespan extending drug, that age change just happened magically. In short: this story started average and it became complete trash after 430 chapters, not even making any sense anymore.

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Blacksmith: You Are Making Mjolnir For The Forging Exam?

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The_Aeon_Requiem
The_Aeon_RequiemLv15The_Aeon_Requiem

Story arc? More like we’ve skipped a CHUNK of the STORY, if that

Mkaliasili:WHAT HAPPENED feels like a story arc was skipped at 430
Mkaliasili
MkaliasiliLv15Mkaliasili

WHAT HAPPENED feels like a story arc was skipped at 430