Item: The owl door of Hampshire
Rating: 5

TheothegiantAuthor1yr

2023-07-16 09:04

Giving myself the best review cause why not? Gotta be your biggest fan in this line of things XD. For the writing quality I tried my best to give that olden days vibe with speeches and haiku's at the beginning of almost every chapter hinting to deeper parts of the story! I update when I can but I mostly do it on saturdays sometimes sundays, for story development, I've been told that my pacing is always good and well suited to the story so much to the point that I believe them and I'm confident about it, will you think different? World background huh? The lore runs deep in the school itself ((THE REST OF THE COMMENT WILL BE MINOR SPOILERS)): Like the history of the founders and the history of the headmaster how it all came to be and how he lived on for over 100 years it might not be what you think, Who created the owl door? Who runs it? Who keeps all it's secrets? I guess you can only find out by reading :)

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