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Gray_X2
Gray_X2Lv12yr
2022-06-04 01:26

Awesome, just awesome[img=recommend]. I like the way the story is going and I even though it is just the starting point of it, I feel like there is something different about this story. Nice job author, Can't wait for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Altered plane: I am a boss class monster

Mark_Tyler_0762
4.8
19 Chs

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Andrew_Grayson
Andrew_GraysonLv2

I am really liking the story so far. Upon reaching chapter 7, I started to feel something tell me that this story will be kinda unpredictable in some ways. It also gives me the vibe that a lot of people are going to die...I mean like a lot. Anyways nice job author, can't wait for more chapters 😁

2yr

Mark_Tyler_0762
Mark_Tyler_0762Author

I think it is about time, I the shameless author gives a review. I believe the synopsis and tags have already explained everything. If you have any questions I am here to answer them as well. I know one of the tags is overpowered but the MC will still have some struggles along the way, trust me. Well, since that is all out of the way, let's get moving. Hope the novel keeps up to your expectations.

2yr
Verbonic_Comics
Verbonic_ComicsLv12

It's a very promising story, with amazing descriptive writing. The author's dynamic storytelling makes it very compelling but also easy to follow. It's also fairly unique, which is a plus. Very high potential.

2yr
d2mit
d2mitLv11

The writing quality is good and doesn't break immersion. Stability of updates seems to be varying from once a day to once every four days, hence the low rating. Story development seems fine, everything is slowly introduced and there is no abruptness. Unable to judge character design so far, the only flaw I have seen in the MC is how quickly he got over his grief. World background is fine but a little lacking.

2yr
Gabriel_Jeremiah_0884
Gabriel_Jeremiah_0884Lv1

Don't really have too much to say about the novel. The novel is unique in it's own way and I really like it for that. It's these type of stories I believe are very hard to find. All I can say is that I will be following this author's works.

2yr
Monday_Abu
Monday_AbuLv1

To be honest I like the author's writing style alot. This novel is filled with just the right amount of drama and the characters reactions and actions are darn understandable. From everything I have seen so far the author makes the characters seem like real human beings. Nice job author, can't wait for more chapters 😁

2yr
AngryBamboo
AngryBambooLv1

Very open concept and interesting plot progression so far. Although it has a system but not a typical Korean RPG Dungeon. I got hooked by the steady execution of the story. The characters behaviours and thoughts were on point, (it didn't feel like reading an otaku gamer mc boosted with power care nothing but himself). I hope author can keep up with the quality, can't wait for more release.

2yr
MWse
MWseLv1

Your work is much better than mine. Besides some minor grammar mistakes that can be easily overlooked, there seems to be no problem whatsoever. I can say for sure that you found the "sweet spot" between describing the environment where the action happens, the relation between the characters, and the dialogue. And, yes.. the description is top-notch. Nothing too detailed, but neither missing. I suggest that you think about having some scenes where the characters chat/do their hobbies and let us know their personality better/get closer to them. But make sure it's interesting by adding something fun or intriguing.

2yr
AliceUwU
AliceUwULv15

I reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaallllllyyyyyyyy like this novel so far. I am a big fan of the world being built. I check like every 30 min I’m awake hoping for more updates haha.

2yr
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