Item: Digimon: My Journey
Rating: 3
Author: Charmys_Chef

Charmys_ChefLv102yr

2022-08-14 01:51

I really like this Digimon story, a few things that could improve though are the length of the chapters, story development as well. What I mean by that is what is his main purpose and how he's going to achieve that, the development of his Digimon and what he's wanting them to eventually evolve into and why, as well as how big the world he's in is. Like, is there different countries, continents, leaders, etc. Also, is this dropped now?

Digimon: My Journey

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