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Review Detail of AncientProtector in Online In Another World

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People leaving reviews should write more realistic reviews to help other readers so we don't get fooled thinking a novel is high tier when it's not šŸ¤¦šŸ¾ā€ā™‚ļø. Writing Quality It's confusing sometimes to know if the MC is speaking or another male character because author use "He" for the MC instead of his actual name. That plus a few grammatical errors, puts the quality at 3/5 Story Development Perhaps I've given up a bit too soon on this novel at chapter 62, but the forceful developments have gotten annoying. The MC who should know better keeps acting like a child, despite constantly reminding us that he's not a child smh Character Design Other characters are fine, as if the overall story is good enough, it isn't too big of a deal if they're cliche 1D characters. But alas...the MC is a confused mish-mash character. He's supposed to be spiritually older + with more knowledge, but he behaves and thinks like a child, and constantly lacks common knowledge. He doesn't even attempt to use his brain at all World Background The world promises to be interesting, but the desire to explore it isn't strong enough to overcome the shortcomings of this novel Stability of Updates I can't tell much about this, as I'm reading way later. So I'll just choose a middle value

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