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Review Detail of Chizaru in Online In Another World

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Chizaru
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I read up to chapter 62 and these are my thoughts on this novel. To be honest the beginning was great, it was cliche but the author writing quality and how he writes the actions and reason for his characters made sense. However right after the arrival to the new world i felt like the story was slowly deteriorating. It's clear that this story has taken heavy inspiration from Mushouku Tensei and the similarities really does bother me because if feels as if this book is simply a mushouku tensei clone. Another part that was quite annoying to me was him living in another world which was a game and taking so long (until he was abducted) for him to realize this is not actually some sort of simulation. That's not it, the MC transfers into this world when he is 16 or 18 or something like that, but he acts extremely stupidly most of the time. He actually got caught to the same kidnappers 2 times and also, he doesn't seem to care to keep his power under wraps blatantly showing off his silent invoked magic which got him into this blunder. This man even got robbed by the same girl two times in a day. He was even warned about thieves and advised to hide his money after the first time he was robbed. How the hell could you fail to learn a lesson after the first time you got robbed? then even the second time he won against the thief and took sympathy on her and tried to help her after he mocked and belittled you so many times. There are almost no male side characters in his age who stays relevant and only female characters are introduced. TBH, this novel is wasting its potential, it could have used its rpg game aspect of the world to the MC's advantage, or the MC's prier life knowledge. He just becomes a kid who just is adamant on studying grimoires. The thing that really gets in my skin in the MC's lack of intelligence and being unable to think forward and be cunning and calculating. I really don't mind him being a pervert, I don't particularly enjoy it, but it doesn't bother me either, but not having male characters at all and acting stupidly showing off he is a one in a million without even being a formidable force feels so annoying. The Mc proceeds to not be ruthless on some random thief and waste his time rather than doing something actually important and strategic. Overall rating I gave is an 3.8

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