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wrote_for_funLv11yr
2023-05-11 23:49

Its good. Her way of narrating the story is quite simple and story is good too.

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Thanks a lot for this review! Writing things in a simple way is quite important to me. It allows me and the reader to concentrate on the essentials. But I still hope to improve on this point as, in my opinion, my story sometimes lacks liveliness!

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