Like every other shameless author let me shamelessly review my book and give it 5 stars as well. Try it out if you like overpowered protagonist and chat group fics. I don't know if you will like it or not, because it depends on person to person if they like something or not. The harem has already been decided and will not change from now on. It will consist of 4 women that have already been selected, since apparently having 3 women doesn't qualify for a harem. I hope the way I build my world is alright, I don't like to do a lot of exposition dumps like some other authors because it gets tiring to read that. Anyway all the best to any new readers who want to read this. Hopefully you will enjoy it, some parts are cliche and cringe in the beginning so just read past that I guess.

Probably one of the better group chat fics, i just hope it continues on ............................................................................................................................

Pretty good fic and i love how he uses a spear tbh not many authors do that for their stories Unfortunately I'm not into Freya so i had to leave the story here

Ngl when it said he acquired the yandere law that’s when I dropped this, this whole thing of a novel took a really weird turn that it’s just not as good as it was before

I seriously don't know how to write a proper review so I will just list out whatever I didn't like. As for what I like in this fic I don't need to write I guess because many would write positives so here I go : 1)Let's go with system first-> he was basically given free achievements which he did not even do a thing to get and was given because somehow his body got strengthened by energy and system did not consider this as anomaly. 2) drastic difference in personalities of characters from their normal counterparts .like how could a goddess and godslayer witch who basically lived for thousands of years show no caution or vigilance when they were given system and rewards and then there is gift scáthach sent to MC ,if she can send basic combat why can't she send her advanced combat techniques and why would she even gift him, like for no apparent reason. when they were told their lives were part of fiction they took it like "ok, interesting i guess" .then there is rewards for chat group, every member got a reward which basically screams OP and we have our mc with unneeded gamers body(due to his potential as some successor to someone op)and useless gamers mind (which fails because he is apostle of wrath) . if there is more then I don't remember it. ***above review is my own opinion on the fic so I am not gonna rub it on anyone who disagrees with me .👍

Reveal spoiler

Since it's been two months and the newest chapter tilted me, it's review time baby. Quality of writing: (SPAG) is 5/5. Good quality and structure that lets the story flow in speech, monologue and narration, so good job. Updates: again 5/5 (shouldn't have to explain this right?) Development: i'm giving a three simply because it just pauses to add some meaningless info that holts progression of the narrative for no reason...yeah, that's that. Character design: 2 just because of the new chapter. MC goes from nervous and has standards, beliefs, and morals... to a complete 180, i guess, half-'chad' just to make a business deal with Scathach the author is calling a 'relationship'. Biggest BRUH of fan-fiction i've seen in about 2 years. I admit, i was excited and built some small expectations to see a real developed Scathach romance instead of the usual. "Teach me/I'll teach you" proceeds to seggs because she's Scottish (Woohoo to my Celtic ancestors) and it ends up being. " I like you like a man liked women." "Okay, I don't know what love is but yes." (Okay, she's 2000 years old... and depending on depiction has a husband and daughter) then proceeds to bath naked and sleep together (no seggs tho) Yeah, so character design went from 4/5 with the Freya interactions and Hestia maturity to a hugely disappointing 2. World background: 4/5 ... I mean you can't really mess this up in a fan-fiction unless the author is illiterate. Solid 4/5.

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This is one of the few good chat group fanfics it is going well so far just wish there were more uploads but other than that this fanfic is great.