Review Detail of smiling_osha in Love N' Cheese

I really like your story. It is interesting. The plot of story is amazing. However, I think It would be better if you try to add more dialogues. The leading character is sweet and I really like her but I suggest if you add some twists in story it will hook up the readers to this book. Over all you have done great effort and I really appreciate your novel. Keep up the good work.