Review Detail of Sir_WendoS in Love N' Cheese
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Quite an interesting read. The beginning feels a bit too much for me to read, however, the next chaps are pretty good, for now. I love the details tho, since it tells me how the mc really feels. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Love N' Cheese
Sneakycat098
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it's just a personal preference, so don't worry about it. What I mean is that there are quite a few details that are a bit too much for me. for example "She was sipping her strong tasting tea, and then took a bite of her crusty brown bread right after." Personally, I just find that too much to read, when in the end, it has no context to the plot. Also, the development is kinda slow paced sometimes, which bores me... Sometimes! ye, thats about it...
Sneakycat098:Hi! Thank you so much for reviewing my novel. I really grateful. But may I ask what did you meant by 'too much to read'. Were the words too lengthy for a single scene or the chapter in itself was pretty long? Just asking so that I can improve my work further more and not repeat that mistake again.
Sneakycat098AuthorSneakycat098
Sir_WendoS:it's just a personal preference, so don't worry about it. What I mean is that there are quite a few details that are a bit too much for me. for example "She was sipping her strong tasting tea, and then took a bite of her crusty brown bread right after." Personally, I just find that too much to read, when in the end, it has no context to the plot. Also, the development is kinda slow paced sometimes, which bores me... Sometimes! ye, thats about it...