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Sheizzcoldasice
SheizzcoldasiceLv142yr
2022-06-19 15:51

I new to these types of genre as i usually try to avoid stories where when main character is betrayed after spending so much time for someone . Had read half chapters yesterday before reading in morning till latest and all i can say is that the grammar is very good and easy to understand , there are some sentences but they go with the flow plus theres so much development going on with fmc that it makes your heart pound hard While readind the next text and the bit of emotions you go through is what makes this story unique and an amazing read . The author has done a great job in executing things, the background seemed to be a bit out of balance . The reading was very smooth , i just hope author not put long long love triangles in future xd, as not fan of fmc being surrounded by sadnees and indecisiveness too much . Other than the update speed and character designs are amazing . Hope to see what the plot leads in future updates .😊😊

Love N' Cheese

Sneakycat098
4.8
108 Chs

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Sneakycat098
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Thank you so much for reviewing my novel! I am glad you liked it. I'll definitely work upon any shortcomings and make it better.

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I am a person who is lazy to write reviews for books that I read...unless the book is really worthy of my time and attention that leads to me willingly write review for the book. And... this book "Love n Cheese" is absolutely worth my time and attention!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Awesome work, author sama!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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I'm really loving this story. I love how Anya or AYANA overcame her break up and wasn't sulking and thinking too much of it. I Really admire strong people and this story didn't let me don't. Keep going Author San.

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I like the storyline very much and its light feels. Maybe it was made for me haha lol 😆 I can say that the writing quality is splendid and I didn't stutter reading at all. Hoping for more chaps in the future and hoping for your success 🙏 Good luck with your entry 😊 Love lots

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I don't normally like this type of novel, but I'm enjoying the read so far (At chapter 13.) The characters are really interesting, especially Ayana. I was half expecting her to mope around for many chapters however, she managed to move past her ex really tastefully. I like Eric and Sebastian, hoping to see the developments of your novel in the future! The highlights are definitely the descripting writing and emotions that each character shows throughout the chapters I've read so far!

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It's written rather well and interesting. I especially like how the Author as written the MC and how they react to situations, which makes them easier to relate to and feel sad/happy/embarrassed for at the right moments. Also, the way the other characters are introduced makes you curious as to how it will all play out and how they will be with the MC.

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the badboy tag scares me is male lead some Playboy mafia lord revenge tag to it's smooth sailing till now but then what hope it remains fluffy as it is now

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I know you will be thinking, ugh, another one, but see, that's where you're wrong, this ones diffrent, not really much in terms of story, but interms of writing. a writer could have a good story, but doesn't know what how to write, ( here, I don't just making errors and such, but describing stuff and all), and while, the story here is pretty good. what I enjoyed more was the authors describtion, I found myself feeling sad when some things were described, I also found myself feeling like I was sitting there with the characters. in the end, if you want a good romance story, that's not just another trash one like usual, this is the one you need to check out! PS: good luck with the wsa!

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