Nice story. I love the narration and descriptions. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more chapters. :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)

Before I give an honest review, I usually only read up to five chapters, but if I enjoy what I've read, I'll move on to the next one. Right now, I'm on chapter eight. The first thing I'd like to comment on is how quickly I feel the story is moving. There are so many events that keep happening one after another with no break in between, and there are so many new characters that I end up forgetting some of their names and faces. If you look at my review history, you'll see that the majority of the criticism is directed toward stories with quick storylines. Maybe because I like stories that are a bit slow so I can relax while reading them or because my slow brain can't focus on remembering characters that are less memorable. Aside from that, every single one of your story plots is original, and the ways in which your characters interact with one another are very entertaining to me.

The story can make anyone addictive Keep up the good work! The main characters have good development. Hope to see more from chapters , waiting how they end up.

The character design,world development everything is so good,the author successfully transports readers to his imagianry world,looking forward for further chapters..keep writing

love the way this story went. the plot and character development is great I'm definitely adding this book to my library, keep up the good work author❤️

Ash as a character is very well thought-off and designed. I like her as a reader and I think the way the author writes is quite unique as well. The descriptions and the story is detailed and well planned. Looking forward to the future release :D

I've gotta give it to yah, the grammar and description is quite unique, i like this read, seems there are two more volumes coming up? hope so![img=recommend][img=recommend]

Shamelessly I want to implore you all to read this novel in the mindset that April is the best friend you wish you could help but was unable to at the time. Now she is more than capable to fight her own battles yet she still needs friends. This story took a lot of out of me as a creator. I hope you would come to understand April and make her your favorite!

Writing quality - The narrative are easy to understand with no g-errors to be found. Stability updates -The author has a stable updates so far. character design - You could completely feel that they are real in how the author portrayed them. Overall, it is a intriguing story with great synopsis. Great work author.

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