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ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv52yr
2022-06-02 21:50

▪︎ Writing Quality..............☆☆☆☆☆ - need more word count. if possible when referring to the fl can you pls shorten the name. rather calling her hatsune miku can you just call her miku. ▪︎ Story Development.......☆☆☆☆○ - a bit slow, need more interaction with the FL. thoe I would preferred if miku is the mc. Well i can't be choosy this is the 2nd ff that I found in webnovel that has miku in it. - fl needs more screen time (I don't know if screen time is the proper use in novels but whatever). truthfully miku is the main attraction in this ff(just saying) and giving her less screen time or any development is a bit boring . ▪︎ Character Design..........☆☆☆☆☆ - Miku is = to 5☆ ▪︎ Updating Stability.........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ World Background........☆☆☆○○ - I'm not a fan of the 1st two worlds. thoe I'm curious for the 3rd world. (I hope the 2nd world can still be changed).

The Author Traveling The Multiverse With Hatsune Miku As His Wife

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ShadowKatake
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I will give Miku a lot of screen time in the future. I just need to write the plot to make a solid foundation and after all that, I can make it revolve around Miku and Katake. Also, about the worlds, I can create another poll if you want. But it would be final as I don't want to change things too much. THe reason why I chose such worlds was that those worlds can benefit Katake. Thanks for the review!

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