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KyoelPaska_LSSS
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2023-06-19 01:32

It's cool, but these wrong and repeated chapters are very annoying. It's almost all the time, 1 chapter of the novel and then 1/2 wrong/repeated chapters. I don't know how it works here, if you can't edit it after it's posted, but it's a shame to leave these chapters wrong/repeated and every time the author/someone makes the same mistake. The novel isn't bad, it's good and nice to read, except for some problems with English writing, where they change "sweat" to "sweet" and the MC's name is often spelled wrong too (I don't speak English, but it would be nice to do a final proofread before posting). Other than that, it's a good read.

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Sorry about the wrong and repeated chapters. But in the later chapters, I fixed the errors and mistakes. Sorry once again.

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KyoelPaska_LSSSLv4

And even with those mistakes I really enjoyed your novel.

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