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2022-07-03 21:26

please do not drop i love it iits change of pace from the usual is Isekai plot i wish there are more of these please please please DO NOT DROP

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Ifyld
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I just find how the MC is being around alex a little creepy, he just made friends with her and suddenly he wants to court her. I understand that the authors reasoning to get them together faster so the MC can be more involved with the plot but cant there be another way. As the author said, he wants the story to be as realistic as possible but i really don't think this is very realistic. I remember seeing a comment where there should at least be a month long timeskip so they have more time to develop feelings. It is very unlikely for a person and someone as smart as alex to fall for someone in less than a month. Evem if the MC has a very very high IQ, the most he can do is to manipulate some events so him and alex spend more time together but i don't think thats enough to fall for someone. Also why does he want to drive so soon, he is 11, and again the author wants this novel to be as realistic as possible so how is this realistic. I will also borrow a point made by someone in a paragraph comment about how the richest family in the world(Rothschilds), dont use their money to bribe for stuff like this and i am more or less sure that they have drivers and body guards instead so they can be safe. I hope the author can improve in making the chemistry of Logan and Alex so the story will be smoother in terms of believability/realism. Like what the Rob said, there are not a lot of OC modern family fanfics that has a good plot, so if the novel is not good enough for readers to enjoy, whats the point of making it. Good Luck

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