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Wheeet, this novel's so goood! Arthur's an immediately interesting character and his position in his family's a hotbed for drama and interesting plotpoints. I kinda wish he stays as a non-mage, ruling over all the overpowered mages, but that's the author's choice. Looking forward for more :>

Wow! Just wow. Jumping into this story I honestly did not expect such good storytelling. The author has a way with words that brings the characters to life. None of the characters feel one dimensional or like a flat sheet of paper. Not to mention the grammar. Phew~ The grammar is good with this one, I have to say. The characters are well described and the conversions feel almost movie like. Like I could sit down in my head and imagine the scenes play out. The mc is also ver easy to like and his personality isn’t generic in anyway. Overall I had to give this a 5/5 stars. This is too good. The definition of a hidden gem.

I don't feel like giving it perfect 5 stars but I don't trust my critique. So, here we are, sharing my experience. I won't share anything about the story, just the nature and stuff I think the author needed to know from a reader. No sugarcoating from me. The text was messy. I can understand texts once in a while, but sometimes not. I need to read it again, and I think it is my fault at some point. However, I noticed that some of it was indeed messy by nature. The writing quality was good, at least best of the average. No outstanding prose once in a while. It depends on the author. But with the atmosphere of the novel, I think prose was needed to give readers a break. And to end this, author should put transitions more emphasized or just bring them to the attention of the readers. The scenes were short, which made the transition ugly. Chapters were long, but the amount of small scenes (emphasizing changes in every text) was not obvious.

I'm really enjoying the story so far it's not a fast progressing story, but it's not slow either. The author has in mind the environment in which he surrounds the main character. I hope you can continue the story

This is such a well thought of story. I'm honestly very impressed by the author's ability to give us a perfect description of the enviornments and the characters we are reading about, this author must have been writing for some time, this is really good.

A pretty fantastic read, got me hooked from the start with the interesting ways Arthur was using to remind himself that he was not gonna be like his father. The writing quality was awesome while the MC was described and told perfectly! I didn't feel bored or dull for even a minute. An extremely captivating book, couldn't help but add it to my library lol~ [img=update][img=update]

I was drawn to the story right from the beginning. The male looks fascinating; I believe the story will be adventure packed. Excellent work, author.

So, let's start with the writing. Shall we? The book quality is just amazing and the way the author uses his words takes us to another world... The character development for other PPL can be improved and I believe that the hints given about the world just makes it more interesting. 👀👀