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Exposition, what is with people and telling everyone what's happening in the story vs showing? Maybe I'm too much of a western story teller for my own good, but exposition kills my interest in a story. Let me get to know the characters and experience the world through their eyes, not yours.

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The Champions Of Light

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Thanks, I appreciate your opinion. Would be doing a better working now.