Review Detail of Dimas_Pratama in Mr. Mafia's Forbidden Love

I like the character's style where the story is carried out in the form of mafia and contemporary romance. However, there are things to be aware of. Namely world building which is still not 100 percent solid. The quality of the writing has improved with each chapter. and Characterizations are presented very uniquely. And there are some elements of psychology, where there are words that have never been heard before. I hope in the future to continue to develop worldbuilding until it is strong. If there is an intention to make a spin off, prepare an outline and it needs to be redeveloped