The world building was the first thing that caught my attention. it's simple but intriguing. I love the fact that there was no grammatical errors (that I am sure of) and the plot is wonderful. I got hooked on the first chapter I swear. My only complaint is pace of the story. I've read books like this before and your pacing is quite fast, too fast even. Take us along the ride, we don't want to know what happened, we want to see/read it as it happens. I don't know if you get my drift. That's just my opinion though. Overall, it's a very good book. already added to my library đ
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LIKEThanks for the honesty, really. I was already thinking of slowing the pace down, as a matter of fact it is the biggest problem I'm having right now. I'm going to slow down and give more details and everything, I was even thinking of adding another auxilary chapter to explain something I missed about the world building and magic concept. Shall I do it in your opinion?