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FREAKKETTONE
FREAKKETTONEAuthor2yr
2022-07-20 04:32

I have mixed feeling reviewing my own work, so instead of reviewing the story I will review the feelings writing and publishing my work gives me. I started writing on a whim. One night I was having problems to fall asleep, and being the weeb I am, I started thinking about my own story. I started casually brainstorming about powers for random characters or situation in wich my characters would shine. Picturing in my head the world and the story and all that, was so much fun and fun, much more then reading other people's stories. So I started writing and a couple of months later to publish my very own story, I don't think there are words to describe the feelings I get from writing and publishing my stories and thoughts. This experience is very special for me. So my rating is a full ten out of ten. This review is meant to be for those people who are hesitating to publish their stories. Don't stop asking yourself if others will like it! If you like it, publish it and share it with others. If they don't like it, well that's unfortunate and all, but that's on them, I assure you that this feeling is unique and absolutely beautiful. So go ahead and share with us your story. Well, that's all folks. See you.

The Apathetic Battlemaniac

FREAKKETTONE
4.7
17 Chs

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Sunny_Shumail
Sunny_ShumailLv14

I love your writing style, my interest was spiked from the very first paragraph. Characters are very interesting and have their one unique qualities. You can't help but wanna hug Marduk, and appreciate how strong he is: mentally and emotionally both. I love to read everything which involves powers, mana and similar stuff. Highly recommend your book.

2yr

HaileyCelaro_1
HaileyCelaro_1Lv1

The author did a great job. There were a few places where I felt that the writing could've been better, but overall, the story was written wonderfully. I feel like you might've made the MC a bit too OP but I guess it's fine. I love where I see the story headed. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]

2yr
Zeton
ZetonLv2

Alright I will get real. The world building is topnotch ( don’t know if I spelled it right) The character design is also okay, it’s pretty norma. The writing what matters the most, the writing and the narration is really smooth, easy to understand. You relax and read this novel without wasting a lot of brain cells. The story is also really good.

2yr
ReyRizS
ReyRizSLv2

a nice and very good novel but still needs improvement on writing style but still 5 I cant wait for more.......................................

2yr
Ona_Gold
Ona_GoldLv3

The world building was the first thing that caught my attention. it's simple but intriguing. I love the fact that there was no grammatical errors (that I am sure of) and the plot is wonderful. I got hooked on the first chapter I swear. My only complaint is pace of the story. I've read books like this before and your pacing is quite fast, too fast even. Take us along the ride, we don't want to know what happened, we want to see/read it as it happens. I don't know if you get my drift. That's just my opinion though. Overall, it's a very good book. already added to my library 😊

2yr
Azurian_Element
Azurian_ElementLv3

the world building was the first thing that caught my attention and that was later followed by my love of the Mc. I like his emotionless expression so I hope nothing changes much and I'll be waiting for more

2yr
Spiros_Skliris
Spiros_SklirisLv1

The author's writing quality is simply good. Well written story, I like both the quality of the writing and the design of the characters. World Design looks pretty decent too. Keep up the good work !

2yr
Shambles_
Shambles_Lv4

I'm feeling good about this book. Although I don't see many books like this one, I'm interested in seeing how the authors makes the ideas and concepts for the world come to live. Can't wait to see more chapters. Keep up the good word, author.

2yr
TsunamicSaucer
TsunamicSaucerLv1

I really enjoyed the writing style and the use of grammar. I especially liked when he knew that touching the crystal would result in disappointment but he could care less. Its a refreshing personality from all the extremely overzealous main characters. Will most Definitely continue reading to see how Marduk proceeds to grow and learn more about his skills. Also the prologue was very helpful the explaining the class system and the type of magic and skills 10/10

2yr
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