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GionaLebraco
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2022-07-24 13:42

I'm pretty intrigued by the plot already. I think I haven't come across like it before. Usually, I'm not a romance reader, but this was nice. The characters are well-established as much as their roles in the story are portrayed with care. The author has a great way of narrating, and I've laughed a couple times because of this book. I just thought the technicalities could be improved. But overall, this has a good foundation for a wild story.

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Thanks 💖❣️for the honest review... I'll definitely try and work on my weak points more. 👌

GionaLebraco
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I hope we grow together as small writers. 🥺 And I really wish we can win an award in WSA, or at least get contracted. Good luck to us!

_Queen_A:Thanks 💖❣️for the honest review... I'll definitely try and work on my weak points more. 👌
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