Review Detail of Lord_Eggie in I Hijacked The Timeline
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Utter flop. Good idea, extremely bad execution. Writing is amateurish at best, thought ofc everyone starts at something. MC is unlikeable and dumb to put it politely. Boring & lack of any real emotion. It just reads like a bad fan fic written by a middle school. Nothing wrong with that, let me make that clear. But it's just that I'm not into that.
I Hijacked The Timeline
Chopping WIth A Knife
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Yet that’s always the case in novels with this setting. This one is great because it minimizes the negative impact of those traits. MC is realistically immature and in over his head rather than being completely braindead. The plot is interesting and consistent. The word padding comes across somewhat naturally by overly focusing on irrelevant details rather than by being repetitive and destroying the writing quality. The comedy doesn’t override the logic and overall story structure. In a gigantic pile of terribly written novels with this setting (like shadow hack, super gene, etc) this one manages to be not bad.
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Daoist0Hello:Yet that’s always the case in novels with this setting. This one is great because it minimizes the negative impact of those traits. MC is realistically immature and in over his head rather than being completely braindead. The plot is interesting and consistent. The word padding comes across somewhat naturally by overly focusing on irrelevant details rather than by being repetitive and destroying the writing quality. The comedy doesn’t override the logic and overall story structure. In a gigantic pile of terribly written novels with this setting (like shadow hack, super gene, etc) this one manages to be not bad.
Lord_Eggie:"📚✨ Listen closely, fellow bibliophiles! ✨📚 Behold, a masterpiece in the realm of familiar settings! What sets this one apart, you ask? It's the artful portrayal of a protagonist who, though realistically immature and in over their head, avoids the pitfall of complete brainlessness. The plot, my astute companion, weaves a tale both captivating and consistent. No mindless repetition here; instead, a symphony of relevance guides the narrative. And let us not forget the humor! It pirouettes gracefully alongside logic, never overshadowing the grand design of the story. In a sea of poorly written counterparts (Shadow Hack, Super Gene, and their ilk), this one rises like a phoenix, a beacon of storytelling finesse. It's not merely 'not bad', but a triumph amidst the mediocrity. Embark on this journey, dear reader, and bask in a tale that defies the conventions of its genre. Your literary spirit will soar. 📚🖤🌟"
Lack of any real emotion? I really enjoyed the love plot with Lin Ran and Silver Moon girl. Or the Xiaoyou reaction after MC died in one of the timelines. Or the heartbreaking plot with Mist Lord. At the start the MC is clearly immature but it felt like it was deliberately set by author. The plot is for the MC to go constantly through more timelines, where he accumulates experience, negative emotions, gains maturity, leadership skills and aura. He gave up on many things he wanted to do early on, when he only started. Because he realised there's no point and it was childish of him.