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EsZeus
EsZeusLv152yr
2022-08-29 02:43

Overall: Nice idea, bad grammar, written as bad as some other weird translates chinese novels on WN. It sometimes feels like reading something from a child. Sentences are kinda wrong, entire words missing, some letters missing, and overall the formatting is nearly non-existing. Most of the time you can't even know if it's his thoughts, what he has said out loud, or whatever. And no sentence structure, too. Dunno, I can't pay for that story... If the story would be out on one of the free english novel sites like RR etc., okay. But paying for that? Big no no! I read all the free chapters, by the way. Not worth the time and money, in my eyes. Sorry.

Beast Evolution

Mhizta_Ray
3.9
291 Chs

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Mhizta_Ray
Mhizta_RayAuthor

Just an author giving a shameless review about his book. But I really think this book is worth your time, the story development and character are really up to standard. Reader should try this and see what am talking about, vote with power stone if you enjoyed it, Thanks.

2yr

Deleted_m
Deleted_mLv2

Firstly, I enjoy how fast paced everything feels and it immediately makes the MC an underdog. Secondly, its a fast read though I’m sure it’ll get gritty into detail. Finally, MC is a furry kuek with a system to boot. So what’s not to like?

2yr
_Nightin_gale_
_Nightin_gale_Lv2

The synopsis is enough to get you hooked. It's unique, it's full of interesting elements that I wish for in evolution stories, and the mc is a BEAST!!! I just hope the missing fast paced tag is also added to the book, but otherwise a seriously enjoyable read!

2yr
KingEherious
KingEheriousLv4

I don't think this novel is that good its pretty inconsistent and its like he's always falling in dungeon Maybe because i am not that sympathetic to his humanitarian beliefs that I don't like that he is always trying to be friendly to human even when they keep on attacking him .Ofcourse i don't Want him to an edgelord and keep on saying "humanity is my enemy ", But its like I am reading just an cliche story with all that 'chosen one' and hero complex Mc and its evolution is truly bad till now at least this story is more of a furry human than a beast I am sorry Author if i hurt your feelings or anything but this ain't cup of my tea

2yr
Munchy
MunchyLv12

The story feels like a bunch of clichés stringed together. It's confusing sometimes because it feels like the author is working on one storyline remembers a cliche and shoves it into the story.

2yr
Zamir
ZamirLv15

I don’t really write reviews but since I read until the current chap I might as well give some feedback. The writing quality is iffy it’s not the worst but it’s definitely not the best. The author is pretty stable with his updates so you don’t have to worry about much on that front. Now for story development there really isn’t much of any. Granted we are only 86 chapters in so I guess you could just chalk it up to it being slow paced. The character design and world background is where this novel truly fails. The characters are pretty generic nothing to really write home about except for the mc and that’s in a bad way. The mc for lack of better terms is an idiot. He reincarnates into a world he knows nothing about and doesn’t even try to find out any general knowledge unless it comes up in a conversation which he just gets made fun of for not knowing anything. He’s more of a go with the flow kind of guy with no real goals or aspirations. Like how he joins the knight academy just because the girl he meets wants to join it. I just mentioned the mc not knowing anything about the world he’s in so we the readers also don’t know anything about the world. Overall I would give this a 2/5

2yr
Pragmatico
PragmaticoLv15

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Methamphetamine
MethamphetamineLv3

Just pointing out an inconsistency in the synopsis if he's more of an average guy appearance and "sport" can he really be that skinny to the point of being bullied unless of course it's written like "till his parents died and his health quickly deteriorated or sumthin😃

2yr
Mary_Onaduja
Mary_OnadujaLv2

This book has been great so far and am loving every bits of it. A splendid work of imagination and art. Bravo, author. Bullies in school this days can be very tiring and annoying. Look at how they made Ray end his life dead after being hit by a truck. He funny thing is that, he reincarnated as a rabbit. That's funny.

2yr
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