Review Detail of Aislinn_Jasper in Pasiphae doppelganger

The story plot seemed interesting, but I am very confused about who Liana is. The first chapter where she is introduced leave me in a great confusion, I had to read the description paragraphs thrice to understand the family tree. So, as a reader, it put me off a little bit. Also, your synopsis is good, but there is a minor mistake, you may correct it and it will be improved. Other than that, your writing style is very nice and comfortable for all the readers, and the story is escalating in a friendly manner. All the best with future updates, I hope this review helps!!