Review Detail of ReiAsteria in My boyfriend can control the darkness

The grammar, story-telling, and flow of the story are almost impeccable. Props to that, author! Some bits were awkwardly described here and there in the first chapters. Personally, the main characters' romantic development was a bit fast. Then again, this is a fast-paced story xD. Reading more, the writing does get better and better, the plot becomes more solid, and the interaction between the leading characters becomes more engaging. Very noice!