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Emmanuel_Peter203
Emmanuel_Peter203Lv42yr
2022-12-02 21:42

I read the first few chapters and felt compelled to leave a review before proceeding. The story is great, and the grammar is excellent. The POV switches are my favorite part seeing as they reflect how each character feels. Overall, it's a good read, which is the most important thing. So, best of luck, author-san!

My boyfriend can control the darkness

funkiller_562
4.8
178 Chs

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funkiller_562
funkiller_562Author

I'm rating this because this is my first work here. I believe I still have major room for improvement. I'd love to see what your opinions are about this book and the parts you loved most. Thank you!

2yr

Emarleetah
EmarleetahLv12

All I can say from readaing to chapter 21 is wow, just 👌 👏 the book is exhilarating, it's full of excitement there si no way you will read it and feel sleepy😆its full of teen passion and very interesting, I don't know if there is any mistakes or anything and even If they are I was too into the book to notice, the author has done wonders with this book.

2yr
Mylittledragon
MylittledragonLv3

Okay...I don’t know where to start! This novel is too good. It feels like I’m watching a movie! The dialogue, however, is my favorite part. When the characters speak, it feels so real and flows naturally without any bumps. The grammar is also top-notch compared to most novels on WebNovel. I hardly saw any mistakes when I was reading, and the characters felt real, almost too real! But one of the best things the author did was the seamless switching from POV to POV! You’d hardly see any novel on Webnovel that could switch POV without confusing the readers, but FUNKILLER did it flawlessly without any hiccup. And the concept of different races—wolves, vampires, ferries, etc—all in one made this novel a great and fun read. For future readers, I TOTALLY RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL! Trust me, you won’t be disappointed!

2yr
Ready_
Ready_Lv4

The grammar is solid and so is the punctuation, the chapters come out regularly and the story is quickly set up, overall, the story seems good even if I am not a heavy romance enjoyer.

2yr
That_sexy_guy
That_sexy_guyLv1

Like I said before, is there a book by this author that I don't like???😅😅If you're knew to funkiller then let me inform you that she's got books scattered along so many writing apps. I first came across this book on iStory, although the name was actually MY BOYFRIEND HAS DARKNESS but it was locked from the fourth chapter 😭😭. I'm so happy I found it here. I love vampire novels and this one is just amazing.

2yr
Zhi_8156
Zhi_8156Lv1

WOW! This book really has the slice of life that many fantasy novels don't. 1. Real life situations 2. Personal and character development for Melody 3. Obsession 4. Steamy romance 5. The bitter truth about relationships 6. Mystery 7. Unrequited love 8. Family 9. Friendship 10. Tragedy 11. Amazing reactions 12. Sacrifice 13. Immortality 14. Beauty 15. Horror 16. Ambition 17. Loyalty 18. Depression 19. Jealousy 20. Perseverance 21. Pain Ahhh the list goes on and on and I love it. What I really like is also the fact that not everyone likes the Melody regardless of whether she's a good person or the female lead. Because that's exactly how cruel the world is. Just because you're good to people, it doesn't mean they'll be good to you. Melody really went through a lot in this book, despite her fragile nature. I know the book is about Seth but the character that spoke to me most was Melody. Oh and I love Hostyn! The couple Kristyn and Horace. I love heartwarming romance and those two did not disappointment in that area. And I'm Hillary okay...😅😅the Queen's powers are so cool I wouldn't mind being a loyal servant of hers too. I love MBCCD! Please more crazy updates author, the audience loves you!

2yr
TheFirstFirefly
TheFirstFireflyLv1

I just read chapter 1, and I would say, this is a good book. I enjoyed reading everything and wished I could for the rest, but I'm too busy. Anyway, if anyone is interested in the tags given or the synopsis. READ IT.

2yr
CHRISTABEL_BASSEY
CHRISTABEL_BASSEYLv1

Another master piece from this author💞 . This is an epic fantasy novel which revolves around a vampire, Seth who possess a strong dark energy. He falls in love with a fairy, Melody. Melody has a disturbing past and a number of failed relationship. In this novel we find out if she can get over her fear of having another failed relationship and love Seth fully, if Seth's love for Melody can assist him in controlling his dark energy. we also find the outcome of other characters love story. This novel does not fail to capture the interest of it's readers from the first chapter. it also promises a ride filled with complications, findings and scenes that keeps one intrigued. Readers read on, You won't regret it💖💖💖

2yr
monellawrites
monellawritesLv2

ok....so this book is amazing 🤭. I love all the characters, though I wasn't expecting do many supernaturals in one book. overall, the book is interesting

2yr
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