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Jaison_Arbor
Jaison_ArborLv22yr
2022-08-09 01:52

😌 Now that's a good story, love it, the characters are really good, and the World development is amazing, the background story is also catchy, good job author🍃

The enchanted gem

Mary_Onaduja
4.7
8 Chs

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Scorpious_star
Scorpious_starLv1

What a wonderful way to drag in someone. I just love how the Author put their all into the plot. The characters are well developed and the story in itself is very fulfilling. I am super amazed by the wonder work here 👏🏼👏🏼

2yr

DurojaiyeAdedayo
DurojaiyeAdedayoLv3

Well-done author. amazing work on the book. the writing style is nice and the character development. it truly pulls and drags one in. I just love the effort and passion put into the book. I can feel the determination in the words of the book

2yr
Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv11

Let's start with the synopsis, isn't it enough to catch the readers eye,I mean I was hooked from the synopsis even though it took long for me to give out this review but I did really like to say the other really did some magic with the synopsis, let's get to the chapters I absolutely loved each page I went through, Here's a note to the Author please keep to this up, I may not have the power of writing as you do but I was astonished by your work,I really hope this book goes beyond limits .All the best to you dear 💜P.s love your work...

2yr
Arstorm
ArstormLv3

so far it's intriguing and i just hooked till the end. well. i'll wait for the nxt scene for avery dn riley. keep it up author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
Mhizta_Ray
Mhizta_RayLv13

I've to rate this 5 Star, the book is really amazing, the plot and setting is great. Only the synopsis got me hooked on, great work.[img=update][img=update]

2yr
Gaelly
GaellyLv1

good job author, you deserve the stars, the synopsis got me hooked and the prologue, i just can't say. please upload more chapters, more ink to your pen.

2yr
Mary_Onaduja
Mary_OnadujaAuthor

I'll definitely rate myself 5 cause, I gave the synopsis my best shot. Even do it was not really how I expected it to be. I'd start posting some chapters as the day goes by. Watch out for the THE ENCHANTED GEM. Thank y'all.

2yr
Azurian_Element
Azurian_ElementLv3

when I rate this I gotta talk about the synopsis. I mean come on the attractive writing gotta all of my attention that I was completely emersed in this... anyway I hope you keep this going cause you got my support

2yr
NobleQueenBee
NobleQueenBeeLv5

A tale with two rival sisters, a stolen gem and magic: the recipe for an interesting novel! The writing is not flawless, but the plot is good. Thhe MC is likable and I am rootinf for her to succeed. Well done, author!

2yr
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