Review Detail of Jericho_Uy in The Runestones

I liked the first chapter, it set up the world well and got me enticed into finding more about the world. The second and third chapters seemed more like the script of a play rather than a novel but I'm still interested in seeing how this develops! For the author: I'd recommend straying away from abbreviated words such as tf, and btw. Describe the world a bit more, not just the lore, but the backgrounds, the characters, how they move, how they look and such. Looking forward to the next chapter!