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0MashroomLv32yr
2022-07-05 10:49

Overall its pretty a decent read, the writing should do more a bit of work and the grammar as well, charactwrs are kind dorky tho making dumb choices thats make me wonder why. updating daily is great key to gathering more readers, you already have 77 chapters and so try fix them editing them and cutting off some of not important scenes.

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Prakash_Baadal
Prakash_BaadalLv3

Thanks. Pretty good review and comments. Will keep them in mind.

DaoistNotAvilable
DaoistNotAvilableAuthor

Thank you for the review. Will keep the points in mind. :)

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