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Overlord_Venus
Overlord_VenusLv142yr
2022-07-18 04:44

"I care about you, love you, and give more importance than to my own. But, your family, property, and business empire have to be razed to the ground. For, they are a threat to my own." A twisted conflict of love and hate, churned by a conflict of interests that might result in the fate of millions. And considering the grand scale of things, the ML had to do the deed and kill the FL's parents and destroy everything she deemed important. He still loved her, but in her heart, only the flames of vengeance burned, seeking to burn everything 'his' to smithereens. Writing Quality: Great language style and word of choosing. The immersion is spectacular, and as other readers have already praised, you can experience the scene building up in your mind as you read. Stability of Updates: Definitely not enough for your craving :) Story Development: Author takes her time to set up things before diving into the meat of the plot. The execution is pretty good and makes you feel satisfied. Character Design: Overall sound characters, almost realistic with a fictional spin. World Background: Can't say much about this. But until what I read, it's been developed pretty solidly. Overall: The writing quality is indeed at the top of WN and the story is interesting. Read it for yourself and decide~

Mafia Lord’s Vengeful Beauty

PayalSinghRajput
4.8
117 Chs

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PayalSinghRajput
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IamaDreamer2003
IamaDreamer2003Lv13

Who is the main ML i WANT IT TO BE ALDREN NOT MATHEW author please tell us

2yr
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WorthyAdversary
WorthyAdversaryLv1

So first is the writing quality, which I think, is one of the best on the platform. It completely outshines many other books due to it's stunning imagery and how exquisite the choice of words are. Although there are some punctuation mistakes, the rest of the spelling and grammar is just really, really, done well. Second is the stability of updates, which is, well, it's pretty bad not gonna lie. Like, the novel is updated every week or so, which I just think doesn't do well with the webnovel algorithm. I would recommend that the author upload more chapters quicker, as it'll help when getting a contract, and the algorithm in general will just help you more. Afterwards is the story development, which I just think is done pretty well. The pace of the story makes your heart pump and the scenes are realistic and flow well. Overall, pretty good. Fourth is character design, and let me tell you something, the characters are extremely believable. Like, I love how the author made the character's backgrounds and it just brings great tension to the plot. I don't want to spoil it, so that's all I will say. Finally, there's the world background, which overall, isn't excellent, but it isn't bad either. It's just a generic contemporary romance world that's a lot like the real world, but with fictional characters. So, just a solid 4 stars. I'll be waiting to see how the author makes the world unique. Overall, a really good book. I believe that it has the potential to blow up due to the excellent writing, just, update quicker. Good job author!

2yr

Li_Yi_Wei
Li_Yi_WeiLv15

Great job Paypal …ahem… Payal 😏🤣🤣 ok ok enough w teasing Great story! Very emotional and I want compensation for my tears 😤 Jk, but it’ s a very feeling story and even tho it’s only a few ch I feel so bad for FL 😭 Check it out if you are int in revenge, etc type novel~

2yr
Winnie_D_Pooh
Winnie_D_PoohLv14

I am the first reviewer here. Yay!! So, for starters, the synopsis was what made me want to read. I mean the fact that there would be a second ML that might be the main one in the future is thrilling. Also, the first chapter got me emotionally. Having the love of your life, your very first love murder your parents in hot burning blood is... traumatic. I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing.

2yr
Scorpious_star
Scorpious_starLv2

From the synopsis to the whole chapters that are uploaded... This is a masterpiece! 💜 In other words the way the characters are portraid and the story is lined is very inpressive. The plot in itself is very appealing to the reader I guess. Cause it really had be hooked. The way the pain and heartlessness has been explained shows how Vengeful the FC is. Her demonic side is well designed and it makes it worth the wait for more chapters. It also showcases the different emotions of the character in a very stylish manner not being confusing at all!! Hands down praises to the Author for working so hard and making sure to put forward a story that is not only unique but also has a lot of charm to it. Loved each and eveything I read so far and I am waiting for more chapters. 💥💜

2yr
ReincarnatedSaint
ReincarnatedSaintLv10

Good start with great writing quality. Hope to see more progress at the same pace. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

2yr
Pinkyprincess
PinkyprincessLv13

Ahh, I'm so excited for this book! I've known the author for a long time, and her novels are usually amazing. I expect this novel to cross the borders and climb higher! Just read a chapter, and I love Ida already! Keep up the good work!

2yr
Glimmy
GlimmyLv14

Reviewing this book the second time as promised after misspelling my dear author's name🤭. Hey there! What are you waiting for? Read this book! It's author payal's book. Grab your copy while it's still free

2yr
Da_Rose
Da_RoseLv13

Reading the first chapter of this book, I felt a lot of emotions, ones I really would not want to experience in reality. The author brought the pain to life with her words beautifully put together. Losing one's family in such a way puts one in a place they might never get out of. I can't wait to see how this amazing story unfolds. Just like your other books, I'm totally enthralled. Thanks for writing this story for us.

2yr
Flabbergasted
FlabbergastedLv4

I don't think there is anything in this world more painful than watching your loved ones die in front of you. 'The one who had lost everything is not afraid of anything including death'. This phrase is for Ida and I am looking forward to seeing her become that heartless and vengeful woman that she is supposed to be. The story is nice. The flow is superb. Only from reading the first few chapters, you can tell that the story is full of mysteries. I can't wait for the mysteries to be unravelled. Keep up the good read author. I had a good read

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