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there's not enough details with all of the words mostly consisting of the characters lines and conversation and the use of (-this) instead of ("this") hurts my eyes

work on your grammar

please please please please I beg U 🙏🥺 pls continue this story

grammar needs a check, some editing and gender check... Naofumi suddenly became a she/her on chapter 6. Overall the idea itself is not bad.

Por favor continua , realmente me alivio que lo continuaran.

incredible... absolutely breathtaking... who would have thought, a fanfiction with a gamer system. I dont believe we have ever seen anything quite like that before.

Pretty ok story and idea but I'm in a constant state of suffering while reading... ...

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