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CaziX_Live
CaziX_LiveAuthor1yrCaziX_Live

Hello, Please leave suggestions on how I can make the story more interesting, Iam still a. new author and I want to make my books more and more lively, I know that haver grammer mistakes but other then that please leave suggestions, Think of it as Constructive Criticism

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Rise Of Extincted

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Monk_Roman
Monk_RomanLv13Monk_Roman

it would be far more readable if you add punctuation, use the points, the commas. and the dialogues should be distinguishable, "set it between quotes " or pass the line at start and end of the dialogues. Right now it is very confusing.

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CaziX_Live
CaziX_LiveAuthorCaziX_Live

anymore suggestions, I would also like to know how the readers if any think of the book like is it fun to read and are the characters likeable

Monk_Roman:it would be far more readable if you add punctuation, use the points, the commas. and the dialogues should be distinguishable, "set it between quotes " or pass the line at start and end of the dialogues. Right now it is very confusing.
1yr
_Rockbison_
_Rockbison_Lv3_Rockbison_

U should use ( " ") this to separate the dialogues and should give dome more emotions..... It will make readers more interested.... Also in war or fighting type of story, there could be a little bit of fun or comedy that can make the story more lively.... So hole u won't concentrate on the fight or mission whatever it is and will try to give some comedy and fun as well....

1yr
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