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Review Detail of Chainslock in The Blood Hound Of House Grey

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Chainslock
ChainslockLv41yrChainslock

A promising book with a great writing style, which is pretty rare for a webnovel. The characters are also engaging, and the plot isn’t clichéd. Pacing is also alright, but a minor setback on the slow updating stability. Though I have one tiny issue- the paragraph breaks. Since most tend to read on mobile, the paragraphs can look a little distracting, which could easily divert the attention to the length of the paragraph over the scene portrayed. But overall, I have great expectations for the story development. Cheers. Will be back for more when there are more chapters. Kudos to the author.

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The Blood Hound Of House Grey

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Chainslock
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Hi. I meant the long paragraphs. They’re a little distracting, so I suggest having paragraph breaks. Sorry for the confusion! ^^

Littleplotter:you mean the paragraphs are too small? I made them bigger before but people complained that it was big.
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you mean the paragraphs are too small? I made them bigger before but people complained that it was big.

Littleplotter
LittleplotterAuthorLittleplotter

okay, thank you. I'll fix those.