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Slushy_Apollo
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2022-06-20 04:10

Novel is ok but what really kills it for me is things like repeat chapters along with some of the moronic things the mc says or does and I’m just like how or why

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GrandpaPeng
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Some part of the content seems to be.. plagiarized from some other novel (the part about policewoman and dead driver)? Other than that, it seems to be a harem. And it develops very unnaturally at that. He met a policewoman who didn't seem like an easy pick. When she invited him to be her training coach to a gym, they only started & acted as friends. 5 chapters later they kiss and she says stuff like she'll do whatever he decides and that she's on his side and he suddenly acts as if it's already his decided wife. Like.. what the, where's the development? The girls in the other world are also EASY: first meetings and their cheeks are already red, they admire him, fall in love and would probably have nothing against being banged by MC. Oh and by the way, his only company in the other world are so far 3 girls and 0 boys. There is that male servant, a senior brother, a master, or that beggar who disappeared, but they don't accompany him in his daily life. Other guys are portraited as enemies- be it pig demon or some h*rny bullies. At least it's not a world of zombie apocalypse he's switching to, to build his harem and b*ng women he saved left and right which is the case for other novels in this genre (e.g. "I Have a Mansion in a Post-Apocalyptic World"). But in my opinion it's only slightly better, mostly due to absence of s*x, r*pe and rac*sm (am at chapter 66). But author often mentions how big of a beauty some girl is, her eyes, her face, her figure, her clothes. That's a red flag... As for harem, it's pretty much 1 woman in real world, 2 women in other world, that's 3 for now. Another brothel girl randomly inviting him to give him happiness, plus some other random, side chicks that would want him to be their boyfriend.

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