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Vishnu_Maheswaran
Vishnu_MaheswaranLv321d
2024-12-27 07:00

A good book, but I just can’t get invested since every single beast has the same name. The translation is so bad that all beasts are named Qiu Qiu, so in a fight it’s “QiuQiu bent and jumped, hitting QiuQiu in the face, sending her flying so QiuQiu and QiuQiu could reorganize themselves” or “his two beasts Qiu Qiu and QiuQiu walked besides him” Gets too annoying I couldn’t continue. If this was gone over by an editor it would be an amazing novel. The actual story is good, grammar is fine just names are too ruined for me.

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Pumpkaboo
PumpkabooLv13

Fellow Readers, before you start reading, I'd like to share with you the wise words of Daoist Mactiremor who suggests the comprehension of the Dao of MTL (Machine Translation) and the illusive Dao of Ever-Changing-Names. Let me mention one other: Dao of Ever-Changing-Genders. If you comprehend these, your reading journey may be smoother. The story itself isn't bad, so do give it a read. I'd like to welcome you to the world of Pet Beasts!

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soul_sam
soul_samLv1

A good read, sadly not enough pages translated yet

2mth
lostemm
lostemmLv15

It’s a good beast taming novel. Devils nack for the details but sometimes over explaining. Lots of info almost ocd level but I love that someone keeps their shit together when writing the book. Have never gotten annoyed or questioned anything so far. No weird or stupid cliches so far.

2mth
Mofiocruks48
Mofiocruks48Lv3

This novel offers an exciting blend of fantasy and adventure with its unique premise of traveling between worlds and taming beasts. Lin Su’s journey as a Beast Tamer unfolds in ways that challenge logic and science, delivering thrilling moments and surprises. Readers will enjoy the dynamic world-building and the protagonist’s clever strategies as he navigates through two realms. A must-read for fans of fantasy with a dash of the unexpected And if there’s gonna be romance keep it to a minimum. NO HAREM

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Wishkun
WishkunLv15

Ahem, Ahem, as a fellow beast tamer I'd suggest this book to the future ambitious beast tamer and readers. it has a new blend of mc traveling to a different world and has the ability to come back to his own world with richness in knowledge. I would like more world building and interfaces of two worlds too but I do understand this is just the beginning of it. it has a good standard meta for beast taming without much shenanigans. good communication in between the pet and the beast tamer too. so overall a must read. May the Dao bless you with the ability to transcribe this story better.

2mth
Rad_Rendora
Rad_RendoraLv4

this novel was fairly good it has the right settings for this kind of beast taming novels i just wish you could develop it's romance into a harem of 8 to 10 women would be fine but don't rush it first developed the main character by giving him the right tribulation or problem that will shape his character by overcoming it by his own wittedness and courage to forge his own fate or destiny

2mth
a_commoner
a_commonerLv5

It's really a boring story, there's nothing interesting happening and the clechés with female characters doesn't help to make it any better.

11d
Rex_Lindsay
Rex_LindsayLv15

Love this novel besides needing more editing to relieve the headache of misuse of gender pronouns and sometimes trying to figure out which pet is which because of the naming errors. But overall enjoy the character development and the storyline is great. keep up the good work

27d
Chewyrice
ChewyriceLv15

Names Grammer is a big issue, and it's annoying, very annoying. I don't know the gender of his pet, so is it a girl or boy.

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