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Chibi_Zuobai
Chibi_ZuobaiLv42yr
2022-05-29 06:12

Writing Quality: Perfection, found no grammatical errors and the way author writes is very good Story Development: Plot not too fast but not too slow either to be annoying as of chp 24, The current development is amazing in the earlier chapters author already put in hints, well obvious hints unless you didn't pay attention not gonna follow up on this might spoil ye Character Design: They act like actual real people with actual background, personality and stuff. Let's just say i very much like how the characters are the way they are, and also not gonna dive deeper ain't gonna spoil ye Updating Stability: so far 2 chp a day which is great World background: basically somewhere between where v tubers were still starting out in a modern world like 2000-2011? idk forgot not really used to giving reviews but this is just an amazing book and I'd love you guys try out for yourselves

Behind The Screen!

Unmasked63
4.8
114 Chs

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Thanks for the review!

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