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Review Detail of Irappu in Undying Monarch

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Honestly when I started reading this story I thought it was going to be a great interactive story where the readers would have a say in some of the parts and decisions in the story, but what I got was a story with no explanation about how the power scaling works, we have a tsundere shop keeper that hasn't explained what she's selling or how much it costs (I'm guessing so that the author can just make up the price if the MC need to by something to save his ass if he messes up), adds the questions that people leave in the comments of each chapter to the following chapter and does not answer them because zombie to dumb to understand bla bla bla. The more I read the more I feel like the plot is being forced in a specific direction and this is supposed to be "Webnovel's First Interactive Story!". I would like to recommend changing this to "Webnovel's First copy & past (sometimes just make them up) questions from the comments and then ignore them Story!". This doesn't change even in the latest chapters. The worst of all it took me half a day to get throw 20 chapters because this story with a good idea and concept was so boring and poorly executed that I kept stopping and taking brakes out of boredom. I don't get why authors self sabotage when they have a good story concept, but add unnecessary things, annoying characters, insist on keeping them and forcing them down the readers throat when they know that the readers don't like them and find them annoying. At the 20 chapter point MC basically get's adopted by the Adventurer/Mercenary Wind Mafia team. There are more thing wrong with the story, but I think I'm already at 300 words so I'll stop here. Also at the time of writing this the author posted his latest chapter 24, but has started writing another story "Wait, My Juice Can Save The World?". His current started 20 novels and is updating 3 if you don't count this novel.

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