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Review Detail of HangerBaby in New Macedon: Demigod Era

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HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv42yrHangerBaby

its not that good really. the writing is fine with barely any mistakes but the story just isnt there. some may find it good but honestly its just not there. its about some kid born to a person that would never give birth to someone. with powers they def shouldnt have. taking ove camp half blood and turning it into a city. the premise is dumb and the execution is equally just as bad.

New Macedon: Demigod Era

MGC_26

Liked it!

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MGC_26AuthorMGC_26

It's a good thing that you don't know how to give advice because it's obvious that you haven't actually read anything from my fic, like I want constructive criticism not half-assed reading and reviews

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