Review Detail of MrPlatypus in The Two Strongest in MHA

The writing style in this story is far better than the rest of the trash that this site has to offer. I promise whenever I try to read any story from this site, it's as if I'm reading recent puberty hit child's rant, instead of a proper narration style. I'm especially glad that this is one of those rare stories in which the narration style is not completed in just mere dialogues with names preceding them, but properly visualizing the scenario and the emotions of the character. It also focuses a lot on the relations between the characters letting you feel that the MCs are really in the story, which most fan-fic writers forget to do. Keep proceeding with the route you are taking the story and it won't fall short of the rest of the big shot stories. Can't wait to see more from this story. 5/5 platypuses.