Review Detail of Ciel1786 in Naruto: Indra Otsutsuki Template System

I think it's a story with great potential, but as it is right now it's a bit too rough on the edges. I know english is not your first language but if you start focusing on quality instead of quantity the story will get a lot better, like a chapter a day. Also, write longer chapter or at least merge them together to make it bigger.